Studying and establishing a good career is generally the aim of every individual to lead a prosperous life. In some situation this goal become very difficult to attain because of many obstacles. Getting married or doing a job before completing studies can be one of these obstacles. This Essay will discuss the reasons why getting married or rushing into a job can be a bad decision before completing studies.
Marriage is a huge commitment and the success of this relation depends on many factors. Most essential and foremost factor is Financial dependability. If the person is not financial independent, then it can become the cause of many problems in household. For Example, if the person will not earn well, than it will be difficult to fulfill essential needs like food, medical among others. Also, maturity level is also a important factor. It plays great role in creating successful relations . Through studies, an individual becomes more mature. Their understanding of world around them gradually increases.
Getting job before complete studies can prove to be a bad decision in later stage of career. If someone leaves studies midway and opts for a job then their knowledge base will also be incomplete . This can lead to problematic situations.
Although getting married or is everyone's personal decision, But Before taking such decisions we should always measure pros and cons of it. One Wrong decision can ruin your life. Getting married before completing studies has more negative sides as compare to positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17813765182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77745615144 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4525536645 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0555555556 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7222222222 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279434354897 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833704858042 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118433776034 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190414816232 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120899515804 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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