Plenitude refers to bombardment of wanted or unwanted things depends on consumers' behaviour. Large corporations have deep pockets to market and promote products persistently. This essay will delve into problems this situation cause and gauge some solutions.
There are some problems associated with this working approach. The human species is born with greed. Invariably, smart corporations are better analysing this himan psychology so much that they offer hefty discount on their products. Owing to it, many local or small business are struggling to be in competition with them. Even though, their products are of superior quality, these never get sold out. Secondly, things are omnipresent, inviting people to buy them. Life is fecund, so are the corporations, to push their limit to sell the product, not for their benevolent objective but to make corporation larger and to have monopoly in the market. Basically, it is trap for consumer to believe in brand's presitige and quality.
To tackle this problem, there are some feasible solution. By all means, banning is not the solution. Although, in the past, government banned the ads promoting cigerate and alcohol consumption, they are not in same position in this case as there is nothing nasty to be sold. Primarily, it is upto people who have to decide whether to accept these adverts or reject them completely. Moreover, subsidize or intrest free loans by government would be a significant help for local small businessman.
To conclude, this essay has highlighted the problems of this phenomenon such as: squeezing local business and having monopoly and presented some solution including rejecting completely and providing subsidized loan.
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done 84
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done 61
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done to encourage people to buy local products 61
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done to encourage people to buy local products 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...f wanted and unwanted things depends on consumers behaviour. Large corporations have deep...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...and gauge some solutions. There are many problem associated with this approach. The huma...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...auge some solutions. There are many problem associated with this approach. The huma...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...iting people to buy them. Life is fecund , so are the corporations, to push their ...
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Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to push their limit to sell the product , not for their benevolent abjective but ...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... are not in same position in this case. As there is nothing nasty to be sold. Prim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39473684211 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84768482563 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5166312665 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7222222222 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28919683359 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745466705478 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534407708984 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158003742295 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397261019618 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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