Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
Over the last few decades, many crimes occur by youth in big cities. This significant increases of crime among youth is due to several reasons that will be discuss in this essay and also some remedial solutions will be provided.
The principal reason that is connected to juvenile delinquencies is the family in which a child is being grew up. In recent years parent should both work and so they could not support their children as gone are the days and they might not have been at the time that is needed. For example, a child who is not nurtured well and feel being neglected, is more likely to commit crime. Perhaps it is due to absorption of his or her parent’s attention and searching their protectionism. Another reason is that in globalization era, levels of poverty has been increased and this means that the poor become poorer and the rich get richer. This dilemma seems inevitable and owing to that who are poorer try to obtain their amenity and what others have through illegal means. It is obvious that this is comprehensive among all the family members and so include children.
However, there are several possible situations to tackle with these problems. Punishments is considered as a major way to combat the problem. Stricter punishment not only for the children but also for their parents would be a reformative action to juvenile offences. Moreover, education and giving youth the opportunity of earning money and become experienced are the preventive ways to deter teenagers from committing crime.
To sum up, there are several factors that have led to crime in youth. Since poverty and parents are connected to upsurge in the amount of crimes in the youth, practical solutions are available to fight teenager’s crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9593220339 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69591496221 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9223901435 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226545402184 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663609980681 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563262921837 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138358603331 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506638693047 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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