Life has become much more stressful compared to our parents’ generation. As a result, stress-related illnesses are on the increase around the world. Why is stress such a problem in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?
Stress is a harmful phenomenon that can cause various kinds of problems in our society. Stress-related problems such as stomach ulcers, suicide and violence are good examples. This essay will describe the reasons for the presence of stress in our society and will explain how this problem can be overcome.
There are different causes of stress. At school and in the office, people are faced with various stressful competitive situations. From their early schooling years to their professional life, people spend a lot of time trying to be successful either by achieving high grades or by moving up the work ladder. Moreover, even at home, people might feel stress when they watch too many advertisements on television. They might find it difficult to cope with the pressure of wanting to buy different products and their inability to do so. Mobile phone companies, for example, persuade young people to change their phones regularly to keep up with the new technology. As a result, they start spending a lot of money on their phones and may even find themselves in a debt crisis that causes more stress
In order to overcome this problem, relaxation and less exposure to stressful situations need to be considered. It is effective to try to release as much stress as you can from time to time. For example, sleeping for a long time on the weekend or spending time doing your favourite hobby is relaxing and therefore reduces stress. In addition, people should try to avoid situations that may become a source of stress later. One way to do this would be to pay less attention to TV commercials and have more realistic expectations of the products they can afford.
In conclusion, it can be seen that people can suffer stress for different reasons like competition and the negative influence of TV advertisements. Therefore, people need to be aware of this issue and try to overcome the problem. Unless people start avoiding and releasing stress, the problems that this phenomenon creates will continue to grow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 796, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in a debt crisis that causes more stress In order to overcome this problem, relax...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98224852071 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.747142985 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4441365874 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280406232118 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105773923857 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567321083948 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189533344525 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542867203567 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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