List some of the causes and effects of global warming. Offer one solution that might help slow or stop problems associated with global warming
Global warming is an environmental issue caused by pollution and creates significant effects on the earth’s climate and human being’s health.
The pollution mainly results from both industry and population growth. The operations of thousand factories and movement of million cars emit carbon dioxide to the climate. Increasing population growth demands more food, which, therefore, leads to more farm animals. The life of human beings and animals also distributes methane gas – a source of carbon dioxide. The increasing intensity of carbon dioxide makes a hole in the ozone layer. As consequence, the ultra violet rays go through this hole and makes the globe warmer.
Scientists have conducted many studies and found that global warming has effects. Global warming leads to rising earth’s temperature, changing climate pattern and natural disasters, such as droughts, heavy rainfalls with floods and fires. In addition, the ultra violet rays make more and more people facing with skin cancer.
For decades, governments try to find solutions for stop global warming. However, this is a really difficult task and we only can take steps to slower the effects of global warming. The first solution is to use technology to produce hydrogen. The second suggestion is to use renewable energies from solar, tide, wind and water which do not emit the carbon dioxide gas to the atmosphere. Last but not least, we can reduce garbage by reusing plastic bags, bottles, papers or glass.
To conclude, global warming is still a big problem, which attracts the concerns of governments, politicians, economists and scientist because its effects on human being’s life are significant. To stop and slow down the problems associated with global warming requires the efforts of all governments, organizations, companies and individual people.
- List some of the causes and effects of global warming. Offer one solution that might help slow or stop problems associated with global warming 67
- Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that good salary leads to better life.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, still, therefore, as to, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5034965035 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82749333653 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9629212654 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5882352941 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269204079601 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734548710797 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873010733469 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148501866594 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902668783114 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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