living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Living in a country where the language is not your mother tongue can cause some possible problems in practicing a foreign language, as well as conflicts in society.
First, learning a new language is not a thing that we could do overnight. It requires a lot of effort and practicing. You have to use it daily or else you will forget it. Another difficulty is communication, you are not confident enough to speak with the native speakers and you afraid of making mistakes. These problems are the obstacles you will face when learning a foreign language.
Secondly, when the language is not your mother tongue, you could accidentally misunderstand what your friends are saying which can cause some serious conflicts. The most problem is when you want to get a job, you have to have an interview but you cannot speak fluently and this will stop you from success. And when more people become jobless, there may be an increase in criminal activities, which then leads to many serious social problems.
On the other hand, if you could get through all the obstacles, there will be more opportunities for you to change your life. The more language you know, the more chance you have.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that living in a country where your first language is not used often can lead to many serious social problems along with adjustable problems. But everything has its price, though it will be difficult at first, but then you will receive many opportunities in your life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'you're afraid'.
Suggestion: you're afraid
...h to speak with the native speakers and you afraid of making mistakes. These problems are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, you know, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81322957198 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63093724023 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.400518726 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1538461538 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442043324584 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148180857902 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900473219189 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240021502483 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419369099272 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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