You have had a class discussion on the purpose of television. Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question:
Television entertains, but can it also educate?
Write your composition.
The world is changing in every second. Nowsaday, with the help of modern technology humans are able to update such information in just a few step, together with that is the appearance of a new activity which we call it watching television. But is watching television not just entertaning but also educating?
On the first aspect, people can enjoy watching movie, comedy and thriller on television. With the developement of modern technology, new types of television have been made in order to bring to the audience a more excited moment when watching. In addition, family can also sit together after dinner to watch television also the way that this device can be used to connect the relationships between family members.
Apart from using for entertaining, television is also the best way for education. At the present, there are numerous of educated programme which is very good for kids to watch. News and documentaries are also how the students and adults can learn from television.
On the other hand, apart from the convenince that television brings to us, there are still some negative effects on children and teenagers. Violent and horror movies can directly affects on children mind and can lead to the increase in criminal activities. Another noticeable problem is watching alot of television can cause obesity because people do less exercises if they put to many time watching television.
In conclusion, television is a great invention which can both brings to the audience joys and knownledges. People should learn how to use the television effectively.
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Comments
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I have written in similar way. But result is showing zero in Coherence and Cohesion. How I don't understand.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun step seems to be countable; consider using: 'few steps'.
Suggestion: few steps
...le to update such information in just a few step, together with that is the appearance o...
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Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun exercises is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ion can cause obesity because people do less exercises if they put to many time watc...
^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... put to many time watching television. In conclusion, television is a great inv...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17578125 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85738649692 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8387701228 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143898488787 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543953677282 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335422869144 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826100080634 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194821418363 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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