Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Submitted by gf811 on Tue, 02/12/2019 - 04:29

Nowadays, there is widespread concern regarding the integration of different cultures. Someone advocates that settling down in a foreign country without a native language can cause both social and practical problems. From my perspective, with the help of the network and dazes of translation apps, these problems probably may not happen.
Being incapable of mastering the local language may not have negative influences on society. The key reason lies in the fact that it is easy for people to learn about other cultures, because of the popular social network, which contains people all around the world. Therefore, natives may not know nothing about foreigners, but be curious about other nationalities, especially people appearing in the local community. Local people may also be willing to make friends with newcomers and instruct them on how to live in the local community. These behaviours can, to some extent, avoid culture shock or confliction, which may lead to social problems.
In the term of practical problems, lacking the ability to speak the native language may not obstruct the communication between immigrants and their colleagues. First of all, because English is becoming more and more popular, they can exchange their ideas in English, if both of them are English speakers. Even if one of them do not have that ability, they can also use some translation apps, which have already gain powerful function. As time goes on, it may be not difficult for immigrants to master the local language and local culture.
In conclusion, due to the development of science and technology, the barrier between people, who speak a different language, is eliminated constantly. Problems resulted by culture confliction and language misunderstanding may be absent in the future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: NOT_NOTHING[1]
Message: Double negation. You probably should say 'anything'.
Suggestion: anything
... world. Therefore, natives may not know nothing about foreigners, but be curious about ...
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Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'gained'.
Suggestion: gained
...me translation apps, which have already gain powerful function. As time goes on, it ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3109540636 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86350360331 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.57581766 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181634883135 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065180541338 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748656236863 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110995508038 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053554451561 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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