Local people do not go very often to museum or historical sites. Why is that? what can be done to change the situation?
It has always been observed that local people won't visit the museum and historical places often as compare to tourists. Museum and historical sites are of great importance for any city as it describes the culture and history of the place.
There are ample reasons why local don't visit the historical places such as caves or place or museum. To begin with, the place is almost same for over the years, so local citizens have already seen many a time so they will not go again and again to visit the same place. Secondly, it has noticed that people don't have much interest in history as a subject in their academics as well, which leads to less amount of interest in museum and historical places. Further more, these places do not have any other leisure or entertainment activity so even younger one's will not visit much to these places.
To increase the number of foot fall in such places, first of fall government or local municipal corporation should renovate the place with modern amenities such as restaurants or washrooms keeping its historical touch. To illustrate the same in Mumbai, there is one aquarium which is renovated after 50 years of service with latest air conditioning system, viewing angles, sound system and which led to increase number of visitors. Secondly, at these places some audio visual system should be set up which give details of about the place, which ultimately enhance the visiting experience of visitors. More over some activities to be schedule to retain interest of locality on regular interval, and local advertisement about such activities will increase the number of visitors either at museum or at historical places.
To sum up, along with change in time these places also needs to be updated with latest technology and entertainment activities also increase the visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, secondly, so, well, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97697368421 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54321845178 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523026315789 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.7386087425 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171200385229 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785400763459 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605277882457 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113674647962 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510951132177 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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