The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they shouldn’t waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Libraries are one of the most relevant institutions of our modern society. Although, I don’t think it has only one main purpose, especially in twenty-one century. By this I mean that the physical support for the books is being replaced for digital one. And, even with this, libraries still tremendously useful for us, maybe with multipurpose now.
In my point of view, books still are one important product which libraries have to provide. Although, a survey collected in high schools around the world, after 2015, revealed that a growing number of children is learning reading in digital books instead of traditional ones. Something around forty percent of the children under ten years old already learned how to learn in electronic devices. So, I really believe that libraries should accompany the changes to keep relevant in future.
If they truly want to stay helpful for the next generations, they certainly should develop other projects to share information, knowledge and stories through different technologies. For instance, University of Brasilia, in Brazil, has developed its digital library, giving access to all these high-tech medias by the Internet. It is being helpful for all students there, and even people who don’t want to stay physically there, can get access to the content from home.
Another serious example about the multipurpose of the libraries is the Millennium Library in Winnipeg, Canada. The city built a marvelous structure to ease access to knowledge and information. If you want to reach books, there are many of them there, otherwise, all place is constructed to incentivize people to study, research and learn. All activities available shows us how a library can be creative. For example, there are places isolated to study with Wi-Fi access, there are free activities for children, English classes for immigrants and even areas for entrepreneurship.
There is a tendency, therefore, that libraries should invest all resources in books, but I really think that they need to invest in every aspect that might be helpful for education. If some strategy is important for learning, they should use them. In my opinion, even these different medias should be part of their collections.
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Suggestion: in the future
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..., even these different medias should be part of their collections.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, i mean, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28370786517 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81982600476 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575842696629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7294975019 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108542032937 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361672765153 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224291154663 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635058406012 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226065726379 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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