Male leaders have brought a lot of troubles and issues to the world such as violence and wars. Some people believe that world can be managed better and the world can become more peaceful if women become leaders.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People believe that governance by men has done more harm than good to global peace in terms of being more associated with savagery and bloodshed. Some school of thoughts, therefore, suggest that the world will be a better and a more serene environment to dwell in if women are put at the helm of affairs and I agree as will be considered in this essay.
The female gender has been associated with peace being good negotiators and mediators. In other words, they often excel in these regards because traditionally, feminine touch and maternal qualities in leadership are antidotes to conflicts. For example, Liberia which had been war-torn for long is now tranquil since Ellen Johnson became the first female president about five years ago. Also, female leaders are more likely to be empathic. That is to say, they are more likely to collaborate with others to promote peace and unity. According to the Institute of conflict resolution in Britain, conflicts are 75% more likely to be resolved if women are the head.
On the other hand, history is laden with several examples of male leaders and their tendency to be more territorial thereby stirring up wars and rumours of wars. However, since women started taking up leadership positions, peace seems to be the order of the day in the concerned regions. These include but not limited to Germany, Northern Ireland and so on.
In conclusion, some experts think the world will be in good hands if allowed to be governed by women due to the perceived association of male leaders with various degrees of global disharmony and violence. I cannot agree more with this view because women are naturally peaceful, are likely to toe the line of dialogue than conflict and have the caring blood of a mother flowing in their veins. 302 WORDS, 4 PARAGRAPHS.
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- Male leaders have brought a lot of troubles and issues to the world such as violence and wars Some people believe that world can be managed better and the world can become more peaceful if women become leaders To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89869281046 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57208643019 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0746366287 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226329579441 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731527157193 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591056324342 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14523743274 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451646527967 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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