Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is clear that childhood vaccination has become a subject of extremely debatable topics because of its effects on societies in recent decades. Although some claim that parents should have the right to raise their kids by their own ways, all children must be subject to receive the vaccines shot.
On the one hand, there are some non-medical reasons why refusal vaccination has been gradually increasing in some countries. First, the most common reason is the parental religious beliefs. In fact, using some kinds of components, such as the animal-derived gelatin and even the human fetus tissue, in producing some vaccines is supposed to oppose the tenets of some religious groups, which causes the refuse of immunization. Second, maintaining a healthy lifestyle is also another reason for this phenomenon since it helps to protect children against vaccine-preventable diseases naturally. For example, by following good habits, including choosing to breastfeed for at least two years, first half year no childcare and minimizing travelling in the first two years, children’s health are definitely promoted, which contributes to reducing the chance of getting these kinds of illnesses.
On the other hand, making vaccination compulsory is imperative to protect societies. First, not receiving the vaccines might causes a detrimental effect on a whole society. This means that herd immunity is vital to the safety of the public, which requires the proportion of vaccinated people must be maintained to protect societies against the devastating effects of disease outbreaks. Second, the vaccines benefit for children’s health since they have the ability to destroy and prevent many illnesses. Actually, some kinds of dangerous illnesses were eradicated in the world thanks for vaccination since getting immunization is to stimulate the immune system to produce antibodies that help to save children from the life threatening diseases, especially polio and smallpox.
In conclusion, even though there are some side effects of vaccination, it definitely offers a net positive benefit for human race. By using the technological advancements, scientists would be able to improve these kinds of vaccines in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60703812317 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06744587676 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58357771261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5739582867 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.571428571 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192747419945 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651141372153 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713025082839 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119499868159 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061145441285 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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