Many children today are not as fit and healthy as children used to be in the past. What do you think are the causes of this problem?
How it could be resolved?
It is indeed true that today’s youngsters are not in good shape and well if we compare with children in the past. This essay will discuss the main causes of the unfitness of children including poor diet and fewer outdoor activities. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including improving diet and engage in sports activities.
To begin with, many teenagers are now prone to very serious diseases like Diabetes, Cancer and many others. Youngsters are very keen on eating fast food which is made with unhealthy oils that lead to the development of various kinds of disorders in later stages of life. In addition, with the advent of technology, many children prefer to play video games like PS4 for long hours which results in the lesser movement of the body. For instance, one study was done by WHO has shown that children who have less outdoor activities are generally prone to the development of various kinds of serious diseases.
In my opinion, the best solution to propose this problem is by educating teenagers about the beneficial effect of nutritional diet and sports activities. Nutrition plays an important role in making the body healthy and fit. A sufficient amount of calories in the diet makes immunity strong to fight with the infections. Besides nutrition, taking part in outdoor games like Cricket, Football and others helps in maintaining the proper shape of the body and youngsters learn to manage the work when there is so much pressure. For instance, kids who regularly play outdoor games are physically fit and intelligent.
In conclusion, in today’s fast-paced world more and more youngsters are getting ill because of their unhygienic diet and fewer body activities. This essay also suggested that the solution to this problem is two-fold: to eat a healthy nutritional diet and participating in more sports activities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'makes'' or 'make's'?
Suggestion: makes'; make's
...fficient amount of calories in the diet makes immunity strong to fight with the infec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1335504886 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72796198115 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547231270358 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8762754875 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155960083217 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557945009728 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419374974179 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956485854633 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400644994686 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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