In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around.
In these days, everyone is quiet busy with their personal and professional life so that it is difficult for them to maintain contacts with the society members. This essay will discuss the reasons for this solitary life-style as well as the methods to motivate people to grow sense of community.
Busy and hectic work schedule is the predominant reason so that many people do not get chance to get along with their neighbors. They spend most of the time at their work-place, and besides that, they always keep some space for their personal development and hobbies. For instance, my daily routine starts at 6’o clock in morning and till 8’o clock in night, I have many activities to do due to which never get spare time to spend. Furthermore, nowadays, people live in individual houses where they meet with other society friends on special occasions such as birthday party and festival celebrations.
These issues could be resolved by initiating group events and activities where everyone has to participate. For instance, arrangement of potluck parties every weekend. Apart from that children’s sports events could be conducted which would motivate not only youngsters but also parents to interact with others. Secondly, people can go for monthly picnic trips with their neighbors so that they would get more time to know them and share some special moments.
In conclusion, despite of modern life style and demanding, cut-throat competitive professional life, people can spare some time with less efforts to know their neighbors so that they can create good relationships and help each other whenever it is required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun efforts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...l life, people can spare some time with less efforts to know their neighbors so that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22348484848 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69211077028 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0818531537 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130200615748 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494041759073 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416460007421 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803438632229 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165919241155 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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