Nowadays more and more people are spending less time at home. Why do you think it happens? What effect does this have on individuals and the society?
In today’s era, everyone is occupied in personal and professional life. In my opinion, many people spend less time with their near and dear ones, in contrast to past due to their busy work schedule and passion for hobbies. This trend is increasing day by day and it could affect an individual and his surroundings in many ways which I will be covering in following essay.
To begin with, in this cutting-edge competitive world, everyone is working hard and wants to be succeeded at any cost. They, furthermore, are spending much of the time with their work related activities. For instance, most of the IT sector employees get the personal laptop so that they can be in touch with their professional network to provide prompt feedback even after working hours. In addition to that some individuals pursue personal hobbies on daily basis such as craft activities, playing badminton, singing practice etc which keeps them involved for longer duration after office hours.
In this way, people are forced to spend less time at home involuntarily because of their routine. It could affect their emotional bond with family members which would result in more stress levels due to lack of mental support. Eventually, this would have deleterious impact on society as its members could not contribute to make it peaceful and developed place to live. Moreover, individuals are base of any community, when they would not put forth best ideas, it is impossible for that society to grow.
To sum up, many factors could contribute to keep individuals busy but they should spend some spare time with their family and close friends which will aid to their personal growth as well as society’s development by making harmonious relationships among the members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...lated activities. For instance, most of the IT sector employees get the personal lapto...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or longer duration after office hours. In this way, people are forced to spend ...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'forth the best'.
Suggestion: forth the best
... any community, when they would not put forth best ideas, it is impossible for that societ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, in contrast to, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10034602076 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72132514871 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602076124567 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5628591942 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171493217374 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682951235786 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646097348233 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108604860399 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602766965674 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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