Nowadays more and more people are spending less time at home. Why do you think it happens? What effect does this have on individuals and the society?
In this modern era relations between families became complex. These days’ individuals spend very less time with their families. Despite the fact that, this proposition has several reasons, this factor will have some negative effects not only personally but also socially.
Firstly, people are working round the clock these days to keep up the pace with the accelerating world. Competition between individuals has become the major factor for working day and night. Moreover, people working over-time to earn extra money so that they can live a luxurious life-style. Secondly, people are spending most of the time on social media and internet. As they want to be updated with news they steal the time from home and spend on a machine. Finally, some people cannot share the feeling with family so they share with friends as a result; they spend the time with them. These are the prominent reasons that people pass less time in their home.
Although this statement has several causes, this will have some devastating effects on person and on society. First of all working all day long will make people stressful and results in mental health issues. Spending hours of time in social media will make relation with offline people week. Furthermore, it is addictive. This has been seen in many youngsters, that they cannot stop swiping the screen for latest news feed from their friends. If people are spending inadequate time with their family, they feel alienated. Nevertheless, these are some of the negative impacts of this argument.
By and large, even though, there are some reasons that people spend less time with families, they should spare an adequate amount of time
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 547, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as a result, by and large, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10507246377 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37604651437 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9249987566 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2777777778 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215287338057 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794615768484 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484860492502 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15267056838 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132910197203 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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