More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
As health plays an increasingly more central role in our lives, it has been suggested that there has been an unprecedented incline in people becoming obese in certain demographical regions. While some say, to eradicate this phenomenon it is better to increase the price of junk food, however, that might not solve the problem and could lead to other issues. So, I disagree with this assertion
Food with a high amount of fat is tasty to eat can be addictive. Obesity and heart attacks are typical examples of health issues which can be caused by over consumptions of junk food. Increasing the price on these foods will have a temporary impact on the situation which is not a permanent solution. As the food industry is growing day-by-day competition between companies will force them to prepare new kind of substance which can be cost optimized which could result in some devastating results. So, instead of increasing prices on food, it will be more efficient if the rules of the government are stringent such as enabling the public to know the nutrition facts and creating awareness of a healthy diet.
One more point to be noted is, in this fast-moving world, people are more tend towards money as it has an upper hand on almost everything, as a result, the people always look for cheap food which is usually not healthy. This can be exemplified in the increasing number of working professionals in the UK resort to buy ready-made meals for convenience instead of cooking at home. This exposes them to fatty food. So instead of increasing the cost of food companies should be responsible to provide good food to employees.
Increasing the price of fat-foods is not always a solution, for shunning the problem of over-weight. People always have a choice of selecting good and bad. At a stage, our body will let know us that it reached the thresholds so that we will be careful in choosing the food. it is a shared responsibility of individual and government to choose correct food for the body and to provide good awareness of food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion which is not a permanent solution. As the food industry is growing day-by-day...
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Line 8, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e will be careful in choosing the food. it is a shared responsibility of individua...
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Line 8, column 344, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to correct'
Suggestion: to correct
... of individual and government to choose correct food for the body and to provide good a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77356544708 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525568181818 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0303896103 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.066666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301043981605 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103476335377 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535776821014 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19577640721 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571755148632 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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