Nowadays food travels thousands of miles before reaching consumers. It affects the agriculture and economy of the destination country, and for this reason people should prefer food produced by local farmers. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include examples from your experience.
It is an irrefutable fact that in most of the countries agriculture is the backbone of the economy. These days’ foreign foods are affecting native food industry as well as the economy of the countries. I agree with the proposition that people should give preference for local food which is produced by the farmers. This essay will give the reasons and illustrations to support my agreement.
One Prominent reason to encourage in-house food is, it is inexpensive to buy locally produced than buying a foreign imported food. External food has a lot of taxes which include transport and gateway, so these consumables have high rates. Moreover, the money which we spend on the local food will help the farmer or the government, but if we buy foreign goods the money is redirected to some plutocrats. Furthermore, people can buy more quantity at the same price. It is said that people in India can buy one kilo of rice which can feed 4 people with the price on a noodles box. Thus, in short, native foods is cost-effective than foreign foods
One more attribute that put forward as the main reason for preferring local food markets is health factor. As the food which is made by other countries, it needs to travel long distance either by sea or land, they are often included with preservatives and chemicals so that they can be stored longer time. These preservatives are not only harmful to the human body but also makes them obese. This is illustrated in the increasing number of people are suffering from obesity due to the massive consumption of instant food which is not an Indian. As this food has a chemical called B147 which is used as a preservative can affect the body with the blood group B positive. Therefore, food from outside the country is harmful to health.
In conclusion, farming is the most critical variable to support the country’s economy which is now affected by non-native food. I strongly agree that people should prefer locally grown food because it will help to increase the country’s economy and does not affect health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...an irrefutable fact that in most of the countries agriculture is the backbone of the econ...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'foreign imported food'.
Suggestion: foreign imported food
...ive to buy locally produced than buying a foreign imported food. External food has a lot of taxes which...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: FOREIGN_IMPORT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'imported'.
Suggestion: imported
...e to buy locally produced than buying a foreign imported food. External food has a lot of taxes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86685552408 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74117637921 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526912181303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.809484173 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.058823529 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320636365973 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111953282726 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965766984954 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228467574786 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897386533849 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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