Some people think that it’s best to encourage children to leave family home as soon as possible. Others believe children should stay at their family home for as long as they like. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this modern era family relations and responsibilities have become more rational especially with youngsters. Many individuals cite that to uplift children it is better them to leave family as early as possible, while others advocate that, they should stay with their care takers as long as they need. I opine that juveniles should be motivated to leave their homes; this essay will discuss the reasons and examples of my standing.
On one hand, there is a faction who argues that a child should be in care of their family. One main reason that put forward as a prime benefit for this argument is, that caregivers or parents can teach the moral responsibilities in a way that they could understand easily. As they brought up with their families, the communication and love between parents and children will be utmost when compared to external world, as a result they can understand easily. Moreover, some families have cultural traditions to teach to children about the ways and rules, especially in orthodox cases. In short, families can teach the moralities and culture if they stay with the family as long as they need.
On the other hand, masses state that it is better to inspire young adults to leave their families. In terms of individuality and independence, they will understand better in the open world. As the time teaches to everyone every the aspects of life, they will be more matured to understand the new challenges that could occur in future. There are several reasons that families encourage a child to leave them, such as; to study, work or live. These days parents want their children’s to be more self-esteem and face any problem that comes in their way, this comes when they have given enough independence. This is the ultra-prominent reason that many parents encourage children to leave their homes.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why some advocate that children should stay with their parents including to teach morality and responsibilities, and why some state that, it’s better to encourage youngsters to leave their homes as fast as possible including experiencing the individuality and independence. In my opinion, I stand on the same side with the people who site that youngster to be motivated to leave their families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...and the new challenges that could occur in future. There are several reasons that familie...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
... as; to study, work or live. These days parents want their children's to be more s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05585106383 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83728485024 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473404255319 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9899195726 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8125 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306868131389 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106252721331 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681609415261 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205998675539 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282030515557 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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