In many cities more and more people are living alone. Why is this the case?. Is this a positive or negative development?
Living in seclusion is becoming popular among numerous people in many cities. In my opinion privacy and independence are the primary reasons for such a behavior. This essay will explain these reasons and would further discuss if this is a positive or a negative development.
First and foremost there is a growing trend in our society especially in the metropolitan cities to have some privacy as it acts as a stress buster in the hectic work schedule. Some people come from offices hence they can use this private environment for leisure activities which could rejuvenate their bodies. A recent research concluded by workforce.inc in United Kingdom concluded that people want to have privacy at home as it provides them time for leisure activities which can help them in work stress management.
Similarly people want independence rather than dependence on their families therefore people want to live separately. They believe that they can make their own decisions which can help in turn making them more successful in future. This trend is popular mostly amongst the juveniles as parents are not there to administer their activities of their children. A recent research conducted by young employment association found that more young people want to live alone as they want to not only to enjoy independence from their family but also help them in becoming more successful.
To conclude it is evident that living alone is a positive development as it not only helps a person to perform well in their professional lives but also enables them in making decisions more accurately.
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19305019305 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76139795115 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53667953668 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2762368182 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.272727273 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253758030014 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945361782 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671186363192 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159174323345 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562806750318 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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