In many cities the population is increasing.some says that urbanization process denies us knowing our neighbours and this cause a loss of community sence. What is the main problem with this what measure can be taken.
It is irrefutable that nowadays, people are increasing day to day life in this morden generation . They are not getting a change to spend time with their family members and they don't even talk what are the problems in this generation people are getting in to it and how we can aviod this situation in future.
Firstly, all the persons are moving to urban cities in order to get good jobs. They are getting affect in to the city life and they forcelly put in to do the morden culture in that case they are more concentrating to earn money and how they can enjoy their life in the urban cities.Even though some of them are coming to cities due to family problem and loan problem due to that their main focus to earn money and they are not even spending times with neighbours. For instance, In one of the biggest city in India that affected in to natural disaster so that moment only people knows whoever staying next to them and they helped everyone.
In addition to this, there are pleathora of apartment in all the cities and childrens are not getting a place that where they can play because of that entire family members are always there in their apartment and even they will not go outside. In this scenario, children will face lot of problems like obesity. for example, my colleque who is staying in city and both are working in IT, they generally comes from school at 4 pm after that he plays only computer games wiyh out soend time with their friends. Finally, he faced lot of health issues.
To summarize this, government has to responsible to create awarness about the city life culture and hoe to invest time wiyh their family members and neighbours. People also has to understand that money only not enough for our life oue need always good friends, good health and good circumstance so that we can grow up with out any issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...time with their family members and they dont even talk what are the problems in this...
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Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... it and how we can aviod this situation in future. Firstly, all the persons are moving...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...rder to get good jobs. They are getting affect in to the city life and they forcelly put ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...an enjoy their life in the urban cities.Even though some of them are coming to citie...
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Suggestion: focus
...blem and loan problem due to that their main focus to earn money and they are not even spe...
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...will face lot of problems like obesity. for example, my colleque who is staying in ...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
... both are working in IT, they generally comes from school at 4 pm after that he plays...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'need'.
Suggestion: always need
... money only not enough for our life oue need always good friends, good health and good circ...
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Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...ood circumstance so that we can grow up with out any issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54354354354 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28473718922 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483483483483 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8927222727 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161003555829 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662253816538 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406097108991 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107785254737 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309253006876 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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