In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
It is increasingly common these days for people to live in the apartment blocks in the cities. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks resulted in this change.
Firstly, the most significant advantage of living in the apartments is security. Apartment complex usually is staffed with security guards. The reason for this is unlike the townhomes apartments have a number of people living in the same block. As a result, if any emergency incident happens during night time security guards will be able to come to the rescue. Besides from security apartment complexes mostly will have good recreation facilities. For instance, in large cities apartments usually, have play areas and clubhouse. As a consequence people spend more quality time with others when compared to townhomes.
Nevertheless, living in apartments have some problems, the most obvious of which is very less parking space. Apartments generally have open parking spaces compared to garaged parking in the townhomes. Due to this, some people find it difficult to find a parking spot near to their apartment. Apart from parking space apartments also have the problem of noise pollution. Apartments have people from different origins like students, elderly people leaving closeby. The chances of people making sounds during night times due to parties are more when compared to individual houses.
In conclusion, despite the advantages the apartments have like high security and recreational facilities, they also have some disadvantages like less parking space and disturbance during night time which have to be taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44841269841 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77953175916 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8868048797 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325227685087 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118075585289 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060605578587 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196959459324 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567247387849 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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