In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages ?
Increasing number of people are preferring to opt for a flat in apartments as their habitation, in most cities. In my opinion, since housing is a serious problem, especially in urban areas, due to growing population, apartment offer more upsides compared to raw houses.
To begin with, multi-storey buildings are an excellent solution to the housing crisis arising these day in major cities because of growing number of people are migrating to urban areas, in the hope of better employment opportunities. Besides, separate house costs king' ransom while flats offer an excellent value for money, which a commoner can easily afford. Take for an example, a two bedrooms and a kitchen flat costs half the price of house with same floor area. Thus, people prefer to stay in apartment blocks over raw houses.
On the other hand, builders construct apartments with an aim to accommodate as many residence as they can, to make it more cost effective, which leads to huge congestion. As a result, there is hardly any open space available to set up any play areas for families with children or to expand it in the long run. Moreover, helding a function at home would be difficult because of space and it causes inconvenience to the neighbours who live right next door on the same floor.
In conclusion, although there are downside of apartments, it can be easily overcome if they are built by following good standards. If governments ensure strict regulation while setting up a colony, more people will choose to stay in flats.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, thus, while, as for, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94163424125 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73766311216 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0497540799 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.454545455 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128118236745 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487811670335 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448424231938 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768990817048 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282608066251 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.