In many countries, amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of the problem? How can we deal with those causes?
In many places around the world, crime rate is ascending. There are various reasons of this growing issue: imbalanced social structure and loopholes in law and regulations. However, the issue can be reduced by introducing certain changes to societies and law departments.
Firstly, in underdeveloped countries especially, social structures mainly persuade people to commit crimes. Unequal distribution of resources such as money, education and health leads to generation of more violent societies, for instance, Mexico is a poor country where crime rate is the highest in the world. Citizens of such nations often fall prey to inferiority complex which inculcates aggression within them. Consequently, that aggression makes them commit crimes such as robbery, snatching and even killing someone for their personal gain.Secondly, poor mechanism by law and regulation agencies also encourages youngsters to violate the rules. Nowadays, taking bribe is common practice, and interestingly, officials of these agencies are more into it. Because of this situation, youngsters do not fear of breaking rules and laws.
Nevertheless, situation of increasing crimes can be controlled by developing a uniform and equal social network. For example, poor societies and countries as Mexico should be supported by the rich ones like USA. Instead of leaving them in the lurch of inequality and poverty, help should be provided to them in the form of basic facilities and financial loans. This would allow them to grow positively rather than negatively. Moreover, particularly, young generation must be given lectures by schools on self awareness. As long as young people understand the value of progression through hard work instead of wrongful short-cuts, they would keep themselves refrain from any misconduct. So, awareness is also a key in reducing crimes rate. Other than this, police and law departments should formulate strict punishments for bribers as well as criminals which can prohibit officials and public from any illegal act.
To conclude, societies produce criminals when they are not provided with standard lifestyle and awareness which is becoming a growing issue in many places. Whereas these problem can be curbed by providing them with facilities of life and introducing strict punishments. Both societies and law departments should work on their weaknesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61666666667 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9771234252 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6387184966 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0847777600777 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267372888903 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307321619852 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058095933501 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020926739595 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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