It is true that, crime is escalating day by day and it is the great issue in the world. The main reasons are unemployment, poverty, overpopulation. Government and people will have to fight together against crime.
To start with, the first main reason of crime is unemployment, because people do not have jobbed for doing and they are unable to feed their families. Due to this reasons, heinous steps like kidnapping, stealing, robbing, e.t.c is taken by mostly poor people. Because work is wanted to be done by them but jobs are not available. For example, population is rising continuously as well as poverty but jobs are still same it is a worrying trend.
Another reason could be, a wealthy family because high pocket money is given to children by parents and some children join bad company after that they bunk their classes and jump the walls of school. In addition, they also waste their money in clubs and in smoking. When parents know that their children is going on wrong direction and they stop giving pocket money so money is stolen in their own home by children. Furthermore, they beat anyone for money.
Looking for solutions, government should take more steps for increasing employment and reduce for population. And government should setup more companies there and treat well to employees rather than exploit. It is an only method to stop crime. It is a last but not least, Parents should know about their children that in which Direction their children are going if they are going in wrong direction so it is a parents responsibility to teach that what is wrong or right for them.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly unemployment, poverty, overpopulation these all are interlinking with each other so this is the main reasons of crime. If, government would focus on these things then crime would stop automatically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: these
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, still, then, well, for example, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92604501608 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70530580542 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546623794212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5538405796 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1176470588 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108766988235 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403474006943 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495216322017 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746687581998 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454511072141 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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