Crime rate is increasing day by day in most of the countries.
Firstly, a child who is dropped out of school or college has nothing to with his/her life. They usually roam around and may harm people. when they have friends who does crime related activities then they may commit crime with them. For the solution of this problem parents should assign them some responsibilities and tell them to be financially stable. For instance, parents can give them example of mark zuckerberg that he has been dropped out of Harvard University but still he is the youngest billionaire of the world.
Secondly, Television programs and movies which has crime scenes also affects children. They may get some ideas too to commit such crime. To resolve this problem parents should keep an eye on what their children are watching on TV. They should restrict them to see such movies and programs till they become mature. For example, parents should allow them to see educational programs or other entertaining programs so it will be helpful for their studies and their overall development.
Thirdly, People who brought up in non-nuclear family leads crime than others as they may be living with only mother and without role model like father they bends towards such crimes. To solve this government should keep youth centers where they can play sports or do other stuff according to their likes.
To sum up, we can’t deny the fact that crime will be increased but by taking such precautions we can decrease it to some extent.
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- Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with teacher others think that it is always better to have a teacher which one do you prefer 73
- Many children are forced to stay at school and study subjects that will be of little value to them in the future Those children may disrupt the education of the majority and should be allowed to leave school early to find themselves a job what are your vi 57
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sually roam around and may harm people. If they have friends who does crime relate...
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'bend'
Suggestion: bend
...and without role model like father they bends towards such crimes. To solve this gove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, as to, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93385214008 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47451850581 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4529150943 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5714285714 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140483169587 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542001628946 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509594515245 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973773639015 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365709273709 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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