Academic Task I
The chart below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008
The chart illustrates the working conditions of the UK graduate and post graduates who did not opt for full-time work right after finishing their studies in the year 2008.
Overall, the maximum number of pupils studying for graduate and post-graduate studies chose to further study while, the least number of students get into voluntary work. Popularity of part-time work was just slightly below than further study for post graduates. Unemployment rate is around half than the further study chooser. There was a marginal difference between the number of students who joined part-time work and stayed unemployed.
29.665 graduate students took an option to further study, on the other hand, only 2725 post-graduate students opted for that. In the case of working voluntarily 3500 graduate students selected it while, only 355 post-graduate students accepted the voluntary work.
17,735 graduate students decided on part-time work, whereas, 2535 post-graduate students did choose the part-time work which was just below than those who chose to further study. 16,235 graduate students left unemployed while, 1625 post-graduate students remain unemployed. The unemployment ratio is almost half than those who chose to study further. There was a marginal difference between part-time work and unemployment in both graduate and post-graduate students.
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- Academic Task IThe chart below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...raduate studies chose to further study. While, the least number of students get into ...
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...ily 3500 graduate students selected it. While, only 355 post-graduate students accep...
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Suggestion:
.... While, only 355 post-graduate students accepted the voluntary work. 17,735 g...
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Suggestion: Where
...ate students decided on part-time work. where as, 2535 post-graduate students did cho...
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Suggestion: whereas
...ate students decided on part-time work. where as, 2535 post-graduate students did choose...
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Suggestion: While
...,235 graduate students left unemployed. while, 1625 post-graduate students remain une...
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Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...,235 graduate students left unemployed. while, 1625 post-graduate students remain une...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82586028519 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495098039216 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7994429503 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.75 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431652560334 0.215688989381 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169714855184 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103930861332 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318439349079 0.15604864568 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104965727068 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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