It has recently been discussed that the amount of crime is going high and there would be some negative side effects in the society. Although it must be considered as a very prominent issue, I try to point out some of the reasons and possible solutions based on my knowledge.
First of all, today's modern world is completely engaged with anger and rage. Lots of terrorists groups are now formed which make the countries unsafe for living. Media is always spreading lots of news which are connected to various crimes. People are watching the world as a crime-ridden place from where individuals could not escape. Hence, it has been rife for people to see such cruelty and if they are not aware enough, they would be affected subconsciously.
On the other hand, families and educational systems like schools and universities are responsible to give enough information to children in order to nurture a person with high standard of morality. Technology-driven life has made humans ambitious as they suffer from lack of lots of facilities. All these things apply to groups who can afford living, let alone those of unprivileged areas. Most needy families do not have temptation to observe and understand their children. TO be optimistic, they just pounce on their errors and criticize their mistakes.
Having said some of the possible reasons, it is worth talking about some alternative solutions. Media, first and foremost, is responsible to promote public education and not to sensationalize crime. Undoubtedly, all positive feature of humanity should be transferred to children at very young age. Beside, the politicians and governmental figures have the key role. As long as they just pay attention to their properties and power, and widespread corruption is a common phenomenon, society would suffer from lack of values and ethics. They should try to seize the initiative from the terrorists in order to make peace.
In conclusion, maybe, it is complicated to remove all the crimes and create a peaceful environment, but I believe that everyone is responsible for making the world a better place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ery prominent issue, I try to point out some of the reasons and possible solutions based on...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...e things apply to groups who can afford living, let alone those of unprivileged areas....
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...iticize their mistakes. Having said some of the possible reasons, it is worth talking a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, in conclusion, talking about, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11849710983 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89767379377 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595375722543 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5770307634 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2105263158 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790540892635 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233016176201 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308080477276 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452918945582 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115725905377 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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