Experts throughout the world has expressed various concerns regarding the people considering shopping as more of part time entertainment activity and hence buying the products which are not required to them. This essay will discuss the various reasons along with various examples which will demonstarte the point and will support the argument.
To begin with, there are certain reasons which contribute to this problem and foremost of which is the improper management of finances, due to which people hardly pay attention to the money they are spending. Constant check on their expenditure could help them to know, how much money they have wasted on buying the things which were not required by them. This practice could prevent them considering the shopping as a leisure time activity.
It is an undeniable fact that now-a-days people are more confined to themseleves irrespective of old times. People used to play many games like cricket, hockey, footbal etc together in their free times with their kith and kins. But in the progressive world of modern civilization they have now lost the values of those traditional free time activites and shopping has turned a form of entertainment for them. In my opinion it is definately not the positive development of the society beacuse they are wasting their time and money to buy the products which they barely use and ultimately it become waste for them. Due to this trend acute rise in waste generation has been observed in past few decades.
In the essence of above mentioned points, it is evident that good financial management skills could help people to manage their money in a better way and can stop them from spending money on irrelavent products. The significant rise in waste generation has proved the deterimental effects of follwoing this practice on environment.
- In many countries around the world shopping has turned into a form of entertainment rather than a way of getting what people need Discuss the reason for this trend Is it a positive or negative development 73
- Some people think competitive sport is important for a child s education Others think it has negative effects on children Discuss both views and give your opinion 81
- In some countries people are now buying fewer new things and buying more second hand things instead In your opinion what are some possible reasons for this Is this a positive or negative trend 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... people considering shopping as more of part time entertainment activity and hence buying...
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Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...which they barely use and ultimately it become waste for them. Due to this trend acute...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, so, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10367892977 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67711076914 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7661885221 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166237658499 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613371507094 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382075183524 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959236353289 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422395414628 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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