In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.
In most of the western countries, values such as self-reliant and independence are highly valued. Owing to this, youngsters make up their minds to leave their family and prefer to either live alone or with their friends. This trend is a positive advancement since it instils a sense of responsibility and better parent-child relationship.
Once a person starts to live all by themself or with friends, they immediately realize to be more responsible. In other words, now they are no more in their family home, they have to do most of the household work alone or distribute it with friends. In addition, while renting a place one must pay rent as well as adhere to the landlord’s rules, thus, they embark on financial planning and also start to realize the importance of following rules. For instance, after living in a rented apartment for almost a year, I am more aware of my spending habits and can certainly say that I have become a master at managing money.
Apart from this, when a young individual is living away from their family, they tend to realize the importance of family in their life. They become aware of the things their parents did for them which they took for granted at that time. For example, whether it was my father accompanying me the first day of my job or my mother’s care when I was sick, I miss them since there is no one to whom I can share my feelings with a piece of genuine advice. Thus, not living with my family has brought me closure to my mom and dad. This experience has brought me, and my parents close and improved our relationship.
To conclude, living alone or with friends brought a sense of greater responsibilities and improved personal relationship, so this trend is highly positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71475409836 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76367188532 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4710278851 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275875559317 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1002137838 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685587812651 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155667366333 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416658923602 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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