In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.
My school finish I go to university for study and I go away from parents home. I go to hostel and stay with 3 peoples in one room. My culture peoples don’t get out of parent homes till the finish getting married. Next, the girl marry also come stay in the boy house with parents. The girl go away from parents house after the marry finish.
I stay in hostel with too much problems. Sleep no coming because other peoples make too much noise. Sing song loud. I no study and get not good mark. Later, I finish studys and goes to working place, my papa very happy.
Some peoples thinkings that go hostel then stand on legs. But problems coming peoples facing making strong then going job. If get good job get good girl marry and go to papa house. This is very good examples for people go get out and do everything.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...in the boy house with parents. The girl go away from parents house after the marry...
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Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...rry finish. I stay in hostel with too much problems. Sleep no coming because other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30519480519 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95747719893 2.80592935109 70% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 506.74238477 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.2397559053 49.4020404114 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.3571428571 106.682146367 44% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0 20.7667163134 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120588106082 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475803409527 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382816203055 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825883754797 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528008857411 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 13.0946893788 34% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 50.2224549098 171% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 11.3001002004 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.53 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.03 8.58950901804 70% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 10.7795591182 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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