You are working in a company. You want to take a training course related to work. Write a letter to your employer.
- Describe the course you want to take
- Explain how it will help you.
- Suggest suitable time to do the course
Dear Manjeet,
I am work in Brampton branch as truck driver and write this letter to check for permission to do sales training for myself.
I finish my school in Punjab and now staying in Brampton. I speak in Punjabi and Hindi and managed little in English also. I am interest in Sales and want to take the training and myself good with peoples.
Sales training booking is open for everybody for June. Please approve for me because this training helped me to do parttime job in sales department in weekend. This help me make more money and can pay for high level truck driving program.
The sales department confirm that the peoples attend the training can come weekend or 5-7pm evening. Both ok for me and not distub my work. I need you letter to take and sign up quickly as booking is closed by next Wednesday.
I am also keeping the handout about the training. You can please check and find I am good and ready for this sales training in June. I request you please sign for me and I can go for the Sales training.
Yours Sincerely,
Gurdeep YM
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...and Hindi and managed little in English also. I am interest in Sales and want to tak...
^^^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ndi and managed little in English also. I am interest in Sales and want to take t...
^
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...nd managed little in English also. I am interest in Sales and want to take the training ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the Sales training. Yours Sincerely, Gurdeep YM
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47150259067 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26925260148 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544041450777 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6373194896 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6428571429 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156305039964 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575393731106 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522132340445 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970976460428 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360410844819 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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