Many countries consider eighteen year olds to be adults, while other countries don’t. What do you think about it? Give your opinion and some relevant examples based on your own experience.
In most part of countries it is normal that eighteen is an age, when every person (excluding some exceptions) becomes an adult. This is age of majority. However, some countries set another age of majority to their citizens. It can be older or yonger age, which depends on their cultural, social and national features. I believe that eighteen is the most comfortable and average option for that purposes.
Firstly, there are a lot of common in social life and educational systems in many countries, especially in developed and developing countries. The average person in eighteen usually has finished school at this time, this person can get a driving licence, go tho the high school. As a result, the person starts to live with a lot of new rights and responsibilities and it means new important decisions and changes. Therefore, eighteen seems like a correct age to install it as a age of majority.
Secondly, if it's necessary, the laws allow in some cases to change this age for particular persons. This flexible regulation can avoid problems with cultural, national conflicts. For instance, in my country, which is called Russian Federation, we also have eighteen as a legal age of majority, but sometimes you have rights to use emancipation process to use all rights and duties of adult person. There are some cases like wedding or business. And it helps to make our regulation more comfortable for citizens in different edges of big country, because in the south republic's’ traditions allow marriage between residents after fourteen years old. I have a friend with the similar case and he indeed was sixteen when he married.
In conclusion, it is absolutely true that every government decide to choose their own age of majority, and there are no problems with countries with higher or smaller age of recognition someone as adult. In some conditions it will be better to set the other age. But particularly in my case I consider, that eighteen is the optimal age, which takes a compromise between different interests.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98820058997 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85312808785 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542772861357 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7917796281 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109780639122 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369068619808 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032664699369 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717967817258 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288052781068 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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