Many countries increase the amount of household garbage going to landfill every year. What are the causes? What can be done to reduce it?
Waste control is the highly debated concern for the environmentalists of the entire world. It has been observed that the increased amount of household garbage is going to landfill in many countries. There are arrays of reasons behind this development which is having many implications. In the following essay, I would like to highlight some of the reasons along with the possible solutions to reduce it at the optimum level.
To commence with, the exponential increase in the population is the foremost reason behind the increase in the household garbage. For instance, the increase in the population is the source of the high volume of human waste and the system of human waste management end up at the landfill. Secondly, the change in the lifestyle of people has also played an important role in the increase of junk. For example , the heavy use of plastic and paper in the daily routine, buying the mineral water bottle and discarding it into the garbage are the fewer examples.Sanitary garbages is also the newer issue into the existing problems. last but not least, waste of vegetables and fruits along with the wastage of excessively cooked food are also the reason of increase of garbage which is buried into the land.
The landfill can cause several damages to the environment in terms of land and water pollution. To overcome from these negative impacts of the landfill, the certain strong measure should be initiated by the individual and government collectively. Firstly, one should change their lifestyle and limits the use of paper and plastic to support the environment betterment. It can be done by taking small initiatives like using a homemade bag to carry groceries and others. Moreover, the government should design and implement a proper waste management through which people can discarded garbage in categories like wet, dry and recycling. This will help to bury only those garbage which can not only stop distorting land but also enrich the land quality.
Finally, population control can be the most effective solution for most of the current issues of the world. The government and individual should hold the hand to educate the society for the population control . The government can declare and run incentive programs and benefits for those who have small families.
All in all, proper deveopment of waste control system and procedures can help to compaque the volume of garbage which will get burried and so in saving the environment in many ways.
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Essay evaluation report
the environmentalists of the entire world
the environmentalists in/cross the entire world
the system of human waste management end up at the landfill.
the system ... ends up at the landfill.
Sanitary garbages is also the newer issue
Sanitary garbages are also the newer issue
one should change their lifestyle and limits the use of paper
one should change their lifestyle and limit the use of paper
people can discarded garbage in categories
people can discard garbage in categories
The government can declare and run incentive programs and benefits for those who have small families.
The government can declare and run incentive programs and benefit for those who have small families.
Sentence: All in all, proper deveopment of waste control system and procedures can help to compaque the volume of garbage which will get burried and so in saving the environment in many ways.
Error: deveopment Suggestion: development
Error: compaque Suggestion: compare
Error: burried Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Words: 410 while No. of Different Words: 204 //it means it has some duplicated content
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 410 350
No. of Characters: 2027 1500
No. of Different Words: 204 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.5 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.944 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.611 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.426 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.552 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...lowing essay, I would like to highlight some of the reasons along with the possible solutio...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ole in the increase of junk. For example , the heavy use of plastic and paper in t...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sanitary
...into the garbage are the fewer examples.Sanitary garbages is also the newer issue into t...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...newer issue into the existing problems. last but not least, waste of vegetables and ...
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Line 5, column 664, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this garbage' or 'those garbages'?
Suggestion: this garbage; those garbages
... recycling. This will help to bury only those garbage which can not only stop distorting land...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e the society for the population control . The government can declare and run ince...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269841269841 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.12925170068 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0839002267574 0.0946595960268 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0408163265306 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0136054421769 0.0437548338989 31% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133786848073 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0408163265306 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74413294633 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0249433106576 0.0326793684256 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.140589569161 0.0861772015684 163% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.031746031746 0.021408717616 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136054421769 0.011925033212 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2485.0 1933.35771543 129% => OK
No of words: 411.0 316.048096192 130% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04622871046 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.379562043796 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274939172749 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194647201946 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133819951338 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74413294633 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.037074148 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493917274939 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.3063168358 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6315789474 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1779430037 49.517814964 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.789473684 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.814263465372 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 49.1254962223 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.41975308642 1.69124875643 143% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427784604836 0.332605444948 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.153012467709 0.102741220458 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0829073895938 0.0668466124924 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.64320273317 0.534860350844 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160142221562 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202194681513 0.134430193775 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807988598186 0.0742795772207 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.471086393066 0.324371583561 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.129644962591 0.0638462369009 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294619456166 0.228012699653 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797213091708 0.058150111329 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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