In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it ?
In the recent years, crime has become an important issue for many countries as it is becoming more violent and increasing day by day. This is mainly because of lack of education and fewer job opportunities for the youth which are correlated. There are various solutions to curb the violence and crime rate.
The problem arises when people are uneducated and they are unable to find work to make a living successfully. They indulge in criminal activities for fulfilling their basic needs such as food, clothing, and shelter. For instance, the crime rate is the highest in the African continent and it is observed that the literacy rate in the region is lowest in the world. Because of lack of education the people are unable to find a job to make a decent living and eventually resort to crime industry.
However, there are two main strategies which the government can adopt to control the crime rate. Firstly, increasing the level of education or giving them vocational training so that they develop skills required for availing a job and secondly creating more and more job opportunities. To exemplify, the Chinese have developed manufacturing industries and created an infrastructure for the entire world to invest and manufacture in china, thereby creating jobs in the country. This pulls the youth towards employment and earning a livelihood legally.
In conclusion, it is necessary to take actions to curtail unlawful and illegal activities by providing better education and creating additional employment sources. This will enable the government to maintain law and order in the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...ain strategies which the government can adopt to control the crime rate. Firstly, increa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85098083402 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2177505042 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189054618394 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644237315022 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761088083831 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113570353563 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905555009771 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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