With the growing population, health-related problems are also increasing rapidly. Nowadays, we are learning about various new diseases almost every day. Though identifying new diseases can be considered as scientific and medical advancements and some may argue that many of them aren’t new, it cannot be denied that new sicknesses are also coming into existence regularly, which were not known before. One of the biggest causes of people’s deteriorating health is their detrimental ways of living.
Our planet Earth is the most hospitable in Milky Way Galaxy but with limited natural resources. However, there has been a population explosion around the world and with more mouths to feed; people have started using pesticides and other chemicals heavily to grow more crops. These chemicals don’t just wash away but get mixed with the end product which we consume daily. It may not look harmful at first but it works as a slow poisoning.
Apart from that, in this age of technological advancements, multiple social media and shopping applications have cropped up. With everything available at the touch of a finger, communication can be sent through different social media applications and a huge amount of junk food can be ordered to become obese which eventually leads people to sever anxiety and heart diseases.
To tackle such health problems, we should opt for organic foods and work out daily. Rather than using Facebook to talk to others, we should go out to see our friends personally which will strengthen our relations and will be helpful to end the anxiety problems as well.
In essence, even though people know how to live a healthy life but most of them are too lazy to take any step toward it. Embracing only a few but beneficial habits such as meditation, daily work out and organic meals make a huge impact on people’s health and also teach them to live in a healthier way.
- Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV and reading them on newspaper .What is the reason?Is it good idea to copy famous personalities? 84
- You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTell the mana 78
- Both the rich and the poor find the accessibility into university difficult Do you agree or disagree 74
- some people think that the development of technology help to decrease crime and other people think that would encourage crime to discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways.What do you think the reasons for this and how can it be solved?Give relevant examples from your experience. 95
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06624605678 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78060634335 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643533123028 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5867150398 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145101156134 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044273539342 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306456405862 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740537524874 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306307777076 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.