Heath is the greatest known wealth. However, the priority of the people in many countries have now have changed to the wealth or Financial prosperity. The new lifestyle has caused ruinous effect to the health of the wellbeing of the people. In my perspective major reasons for poor health are lack of exercise and unhealthy food.
In the sedentary lifestyle, lack of regular exercise is like cherry on the cake for being unhealthy .Gone are the day, when the complete body workout was possible while doing the households chores with the advancement in technology, there are remotes for everything , thus making people more glued in their comfort chairs. People tend to spend long hours in office, increases stress, laziness and many other hazardous impact to health.
The other reason for many health problem is the unhealthy food. The food we eat is the major contributor to our health. In this fast pace of life to save time , people prefer to have fast food which has ruinous impact on the well-being .Fast food or packed food have many ingredients such as OLA, which adversely affect the human body. The benefits of the balanced nutritious diet are being ignored on the cost of time and taste.
Nevertheless, these health issues can be controlled by improving lifestyle and food choices. Regular physical workout in any form for e.g. yoga, walk, gym , etc. should be necessity for everyone .Corporate office can encourages employees for the same, by placing small machine in office or offering coupons to Gym, etc. as rewards. Government can contribute to this great initiative by placing exercise machine in public places and park. Along with the workout, awareness campaign for the benefits of balanced nutrias diet should be launched.
To conclude, people across the globe are suffering from diseases due to sedentary lifestyle. Nonetheless, being more active and eating healthy can overcome such issues.
- Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion. 61
- In many countries, people have many health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how it can be solved? Give relevant examples from your experience. 78
- Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion 75
- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...f the people in many countries have now have changed to the wealth or Financial pros...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e cherry on the cake for being unhealthy .Gone are the day, when the complete body...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Gone
...cherry on the cake for being unhealthy .Gone are the day, when the complete body wor...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...y on the cake for being unhealthy .Gone are the day, when the complete body workout...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssible while doing the households chores with the advancement in technology, ther...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nology, there are remotes for everything , thus making people more glued in their ...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ich has ruinous impact on the well-being .Fast food or packed food have many ingr...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Fast
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Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 6, column 173, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
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Line 6, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... , etc. should be necessity for everyone .Corporate office can encourages employee...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Corporate
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Line 6, column 218, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'encourage'
Suggestion: encourage
...sity for everyone .Corporate office can encourages employees for the same, by placing smal...
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Line 6, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, thus, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13099041534 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56161063838 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575079872204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3031550344 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4705882353 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263065727201 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772467825535 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667178182364 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137396070212 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327876783943 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.