In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle
Why do you think people are living in an unhealthy way?
What can be done about this problem?
People, in many countries, are facing a lot of health issues by adopting an unhealthy way of living. The reason for this is the unawareness of its severity and laziness resulted in advanced technology. It can be resolved by proper training and affordability of healthy food.
There are a number of reasons associated with people adopting health affecting the way of living. First of all, people are not aware of the possible side effects of living an unhealthy life or the ways in which they can improve it. People, especially from underdeveloped countries, are considered to be unfit and the reason is lack of appropriate information. People are not concerned about their health until they suffer from some illness or disease. The second reason is the trend of technology-infused lifestyle. People spend most of their time on electronic devices which does not require any physical activity. This trend has made people lazy as they are reluctant to get involved in any active sports or exercise.
However, there are certain solutions by which people can improve their lifestyle in a healthy way. One way to fix this issue is that the state should educate everyone about the ways in which they can live a fit life. This can be done by providing free classes where doctors and nutritionists would give lectures on certain health issues and how they can be solved. Moreover, the government can set some health goals for people and a promise of any reward on completing them which will motivate them. Another equally important solution is to make all healthy food cheaper. Generally, organic food is not affordable to a lot of people and this results in using unhealthy cheaper food such as fast food. By making it cheaper, people will be inclined to following a healthy diet.
In conclusion, while lack of health-related education and less physical activity because of technology has made people live an unhealthy life, It can be fixed by the state involvement in making information on health common and by reducing prices of healthy food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy way" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98830409357 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77470436315 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2576261741 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7777777778 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360071920985 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11066308752 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782041683805 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23471748302 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251638109452 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.