You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
In your letter,
-Why you want to take time off work
-Given details of the amount of time you need
-Suggest how your work would be covered while you are away
Dear Chris,
I am writing this letter to request for a week leave as my final exams for masters are due.
I have been studying masters from the last 2 years and now is the time to submit my final report with a few theory tests. I am afraid I need to take a week off to accommodate all the exams. I have tried my best to postpone but there is no way to do it.
The week off would be the first week of January. At this time of year, the workload is bearable and I spoke with John, he will be looking over my tasks for this period. I will also be in contact with him on a daily basis to get updates regarding work. I make sure to put extra hours, on returning, to keep up with all the important things I missed.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Ahsan Abid.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-09 | ahsan.ca707 | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y final report with a few theory tests. I am afraid I need to take a week off to ...
^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... week off to accommodate all the exams. I have tried my best to postpone but ther...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... all the important things I missed. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, regarding, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 637.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.05732484076 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13243613397 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643312101911 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7244385293 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193302916773 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679478109547 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423592275479 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976634988772 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291930253078 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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