In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Undeniably, westernization has elevated tremendously in the past few years, Nowadays people prefer to wear western clothes over traditional attire due to several factors. This essay will explore constructive arguments to showcase the reasons behind it and the positives and negatives associated with it.
To initiate, everyone has a different comfort zone when it comes to clothing. Some people find wearing western clothes more convenient than their authentic ones. My mother, for instance, used to wear sarees when she was young, but with the advent of jeans which is less time consuming to wear is now preferred by her. Additionally, all people and specially women follow trends which are currently western clothes. Everyone desire to look gorgeous and therefore they follow fashion blindly. A recent news featuring a bride was that she wore a white gown instead of her traditional dress because the former was more trending in her city.
Be that as it may, such kinds of development has its own advantages and disadvantages. If people think positively then it can seen as a matter of choice and liberty where people are allowed to wear anything. For example, if anyone feel more confident in western clothes then there is no harm wearing them. On the other hand, if we closely observe, it can be seen as heritage loss. We are diminishing our cultural values ourselves by welcoming other country's culture. For example, if we follow the trend regularly, the future generation will have no clue about country's history and the dressing morals of our ancestors.
By and large, people should be open to western clothing, nevertheless, few occasions should be present where only traditional clothing should be acceptable and admired. It is rightly said that people looks best and graceful in their ethnic outfit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
... If people think positively then it can seen as a matter of choice and liberty where...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...o wear anything. For example, if anyone feel more confident in western clothes then ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16610169492 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74717686956 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8002671506 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279279316147 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734023433981 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536848924009 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150150095717 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480875455512 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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