Nowadays, people are commonly holding an opinion on the use of plastic shopping bags worldwide as a primary force that leads to severe harm to the environment, mainly to land and water, and therefore, it should be permanently prohibited. This essay solely agrees with the above idea and will give some plausible explanations as well as examples.
There is no room for doubt that the vast majority of garbage is plastic bags which greatly deteriorate the aquatic resources. First of all, plastic bags mainly littered to the environment, leading to sewage congestion. This is the major driver of heavy flooding in many areas, especially large cities, causing difficulties in transportation. Secondly, many aquatic species accidentally mistaken plastic bags as their food or preys, and thus leading to the death of these animals. Taking the Mekong river is a prime example, it has been recently observed that hundred of fish were killed due to the emissions of plastic bags to the ecosystem.
Meanwhile, these plastic bags also exert toxic effects on land resources. There are many assumptions that it takes approximately a few centuries for plastic material to be fully decomposed in the environment, and therefore, burying this type of material in landfills is not a wise option for many nations. Furthermore, plastic material manufacture consumes a great deal of energy and its side products are then disposed to the ecology causing heavy pollution. Some developed countries are taking advantage of advanced technology to create biodegradable bags involving biomaterial like lattice acid which is easily broken down after being used for years.
In conclusion, due to tons of disadvantages that plastic shopping bags bring for the biodiversity, it is understandable that it should be restricted and replaced by another environmentally-friendly material.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4275862069 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18416115845 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6056090836 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244522985258 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872169002493 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254241964973 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144922095347 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256695636161 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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