In many countries smoke is now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree?
Smoking is prohibited at public places in most of the nations. I am in favour of the idea that it will be helpful to non-smokers' health, and youth will not attract to get this bad habit.
Ban to do smoke on crowded places will protect the health of passive smokers. This is to say that mostly people who do not smoke are affected by inhaling smoked air released by smokers on public places. As a result, people who do not smoke get lungs and heart diseases such as cancer. For example, World Health Organisation reveals the report that most of the cancer patients are passive smokers who unintentionally breathe in smoke polluted air.
Another benefit of doing smoke illegal is that it will aid young generation as they will not mimic their elders by seeing them. This is because many children got inspiration to do smoking when they see how other people enjoying this bad habit, and they try to do the same without thinking of its harmful effects. Because they are immature at that stage to think right or wrong. For instance, Times of India reported that after considering smoking as a crime at public places, 70% of youth have escaped to get this habit.
In conclusion, by prohibition on smoking, nations can decrease the amount of lungs diseases in public as well as it can help young people to escape from it. It is predicted that this rule will help most of the future generations for not adopting smoking habit in many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64960629921 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42756365233 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3017079689 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4166666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217698095779 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908871015257 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618578087121 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128430359639 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538030527335 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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