In many countries today, there are concerns about the unhealthy lifestyles that people lead. What health issues are linked to modern lifestyles? What answers to these problems can you suggest?
In many countries today, most people are concerns about the unhealthy lifestyles that is caused by modern lifestyles. While this causes some effects to people, there are also several solutions that I can suggest.
Some obvious effects are easily to be realized and the first is the issue of obesity. According to research, those who work in the office and use transportation instead of walking are more likely to be obese than others. Overweight problem causes various medical issues including heart trouble and strokes. Furthermore, we must consider the issue of metal health . Modern lifestyle, nowadays, are highly pressurized, people have to work long hours and the time for them to relax and entertain is extremely little, leading to enormous stress and anxiety.
A number of solutions are in place to solve this problem. I think the most obvious solution is to improve awareness of health issues, especially obesity. The government, media and school should encourage people to exercise to reduce their risk of being overweight and limit the use of fast food. As a result, this way helps everyone have a good health and reduces risk of heart disease and strokes. A further step is that people should spend time with family life or relaxing. Consequently, people will reduce pressure from work and improve psychological issues.
In conclusion, the key problems of obesity and stress can be addressed by our perceptions and I believe that with the aforementioned solutions above, we can improve our unhealthy lifestyle today through it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.224 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74000490201 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9275611956 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242641040472 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771462235535 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993707696612 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16055205163 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944089339908 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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