In many countries, young people are finding it harder and harder to find permanent jobs. Why is this? What can be done to improve the situation?
It is undeniable fact that more and more young pupil is facing difficulty in finding stable jobs. There are lot of reasons behind surge in this situation . In the following paragraph will discuss the causes and plausible solutions for their unemployment.
Education plays a vital role in getting a job but because of many reason people lack proper and adequate knowledge. Firstly, many educational institute are imparting theoretical knowledge and put less focus on practical and work oriented lessons. For instance, practical or field training for civil engineers is a must, etc. This kind of schooling system leads to creating graduates which may under perform in many real world situations and hence less likely to get a permanent job. Secondly , many teenagers drop out or put more focus in their part time jobs , this results in poor academic performance and they sometimes drop out and never go for tertiary education, which is must in many job profiles now a days. Lastly, because of inflating fees of schools and university many deserving candidate could not afford to go for further education and hence face issues in getting a stable jobs.
However, this unemployment issue can be solved by diligent actions of government. To begin with, government should provide scholarships to the deserving candidates. This will not only help people who are exceptional but also motivates other students to perform better in their early education. Furthermore, government should give small reservations in some jobs to the drop outs and encourage them to complete the required education simultaneously. Moreover, government can organize evening school at minimum fees for people working in blue collar jobs , to improve their chance at better livelihood.
Conclusively , I would say, this problem is not insurmountable if government take some serious action to help these individuals in getting proper jobs, by providing reservation in some jobs and scholarships to the intellectuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35256410256 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95299480663 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2503521115 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168483659964 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548041566012 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430214071385 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962332374327 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334378520688 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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