The spread of multinational companies and globalization is increasing with time. Some people say that it will bring positive effects for everyone.
Do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, world has witnessed tremendous growth in globalization and myriads of multinational companies spreading all over the world. Many believes this technological advancement bring positive effects for everyone and I agree with this proposition.
To begin with, This world wide industrialization gives a common opportunity to each aspirant and nobody got any preferential treatment because of their place of birth. For instance, job seekers from one state now leave their home town behind in search of better opportunity and are welcomed in different technological hubs all over the world based on their calibers. As a result many unemployed young calibers are not only getting jobs of their liking in the new city but also these new cities, sometimes have completely different culture, and this mix up give rise to cultural exchange between people.
Furthermore, local businesses where these companies are established, also get benefits. To illustrate, when people from different cities come for job search, they would need place to stay, food to eat, and many more other facilities, al. these are provided by localities. This will help native people to generate more revenue. Lastly when the demand of supplies goes up the production of supplies will also be positively affected, that means more manufacturing of good would be required that leads to growth manufacturing companies, and many more new entrepreneurs will be attracted set up their own business in the market. This leads to overall infrastructure development, which also gives jobs to daily wagers to earn their livelihood.
However some may argue about exploitation of cheap labor and also exploitation of resources beause of over crowding of such cities. But I firmly believe these issue can be dealt with strategic planning and governmental support.
In conclusion, considering all the positives mentioned above, I opine that proliferation of multinational companies is for the betterment of one and all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46753246753 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11093859537 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8578947327 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16329147584 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569167284741 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579103458864 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106044721193 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827692438984 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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