Many criminals perform further crimes as soon as they are released from prison.
What do you think are the causes for this ?
What possible solutions can you suggest?
Most criminals turn out to be serial offenders. The moment a person is convicted, the society black lists him. Even though, mixing with other cell mates, unjust trials and verdicts and benefits earned from the crime may persuade them to go back, proper rehabilitation and counselling services can put a hold on serial criminals.
On the one hand, the psychological trauma in finding a method to put up oneself in society is enormous. Which may entail the person resuming his crimes. Also, innocent people who get convicted on circumstantial evidence and those who undergo unfair trials may develop a revengeful attitude. To exacerbate the situation, potential earnings from the crime committed can lure offenders to be serial criminals. A recent study showed 30% of increase in people repeating crimes for the loot they got, another 50% increase for the stress they went through in finding new jobs. Again, having a chance to mix and communicate with jail inmates who share similar thoughts can invite trouble.
On the other hand, confining minor criminals to non custodial-sentences and providing proper rehabilitation services to those imprisoned can clear the air. Lot of studies show that prisoners who are given proper insight to channelize their abilities in productive ways, have a better living after their jail term, rather than returning to their crimes. Also, offering effective counselling services to prisoners can deter them from any other potential crime. It was reported that a serial killer was pulled back from an attempted murder through counselling.
To conclude, even if situations such as mental harassment, peer pressure from other cell inmates and potential gains call for committing crimes again, proper rehabilitation activities and counselling services can cease offenders from redoing crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... put up oneself in society is enormous. Which may entail the person resuming his crim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42807017544 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89286701971 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1642473396 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133201618428 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440798340787 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400629888217 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848934393962 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130581850811 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.