In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water form both industry and construction. What measure could be taken to prevent this?
Industries and building sector have led to a growing issue with the decline in the quality of air and water in a lot of developing nations. These challenges can be solved by enacting and implementing laws and focusing on sources of energy that do not harm the atmosphere, but, still provide energy to power our economies.
On the one hand, as far as improving the quality of water is concerned, solutions such as stricter guidelines and laws would play a major role in helping curb this problem. In other words, there should be stringent implementation of rules on proper disposal of industrial waste in to waterways, since they are the major source of water pollution. If construction and major corporations do not follow these laws, hefty penalties should be imposed, so that it sets a precedent and deters others from doing the same. They should be forced to implement proper treatment of chemical and other waste, before it is discharged, thus helping improve the health of water bodies and consequently the eco-system dependent on it.
On the other hand, to improve the quality of air and tackle the negative impact of industries and building sector on it, focus and emphasis should be placed on alternative energy use and reduction of harmful emissions in to the atmosphere. Current proliferation of the use of fossil fuels has to be curtailed and aggressively implement switching to alternate sources of energy such as solar, wind and fuel cells, since, these sources are environmentally friendly and sustainable, as such, will help reverse the detrimental impact of green house gasses on earths atmosphere and restore the quality of air. Furthermore, there should be implementation and enforcing of stricter emissions protocols for industries and construction, so that they use technology to limit the content of emissions to a safe level and thus benefiting the air quality.
In conclusion, the challenges faced by the reduction of quality of air and water can be resolved by a combination of laws and guidelines along with focus on renewable sources of energy and reducing the dependence on traditional sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean ''?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, as to, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12931034483 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00107188981 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508620689655 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5383349622 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.5 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208224143978 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940361740953 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626315326032 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136599195386 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229192826263 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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