You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
explain why you must change your plans.
suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Dave,
How are you doing? I wanted to update you on our plans for the hiking trip next week.
I can’t wait to head into the mountains for some much needed respite. It’s been so hectic at work lately and I’m overdue for a break and enjoy some fresh air and cool weather.
Sadly, I have some less promising news, we will have to reschedule our trip. You remember my cousin John? we met him at the Jets game last year. He is getting married next month and has not gotten any of his wedding shopping done yet, so he is coming over to my place this week and has asked my help with it.
I know how excited you are about the trip and spend some time away as well. How about we reschedule the trip to the July 4th weekend? It being a long weekend, will give us one more day to unwind and also not have to rush to get back home.
Sorry for the late change, but it'd be really awesome if we can still make it. Let me know as soon as you can, and I will get the reservations revised.
Take care,
John Doe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... our trip. You remember my cousin John? we met him at the Jets game last year. He ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1144278607 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.8618401785 2.54303337028 73% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676616915423 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2071703351 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0714285714 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112178245198 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458939178594 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502163221956 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734201199787 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609577571388 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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