Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Governments of all over the world have an idea to increase their economics and also thought to make it as a primary goal. Whenever we have an idea there always some people who have a different idea. Likewise, For their country few people to show equal importance in some other types of progress. Instead of sticking to the one thought, we can see these two ideas and have a detailed view of this essay.
Nowadays, world countries are fighting to improve their economic status because of the economic variance between their neighbor nations. Even though they are a well-developed nation, These developed countries want to sustain their position which had a strong wealth and economic background. If we come to a developing nation who fighting to come to a wealthy nation position, they want to improve their economic status which to be the main goal for their budget plan in their administrations. For example, In India, The finance minister had come up with many schemes to heighten the self-employment and also helps to start the new business. Likewise, many developing countries were fixed their main goal as to enhances their economic status.
On contrary to the above discussion, Few Administrators have other areas to progress in their country all with their expert's opinion along with their people's needy things. Although these nations focus on some other areas like poverty, famine, the basic needs of people, etc which can heighten the people's life along with their economic status. Their primary goal is not to participate in the world's economic war but they had another thing to concentrate on which fulfills their people's daily needs. Countries like Africa had many important problems that their government needs to work like food, water, education, etc which led them to go on with the solution to solve these things.
On concluding this, Some countries fighting with other countries to achieve a top position among the world countries to show their power and status. On the other hand, Few countries trying to fullfill their people daily needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, well, another thing, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07917888563 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59412965947 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49853372434 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2347507937 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.466666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238485351581 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984145060727 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683353115015 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14804286703 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498490611216 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.