Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
economic progress play indespensable role in people's life they can not turn blind eye to importance of economic condition however other argue that other types of progress are equally essential as economic for the individual To my mind other types of progress are vital for surviving in the country so government should equally attention to progress the notion
the farmer factor to note is that economic progress is important for developing Nation as people easy to get amenities like prosperous life satisfaction and so on for example if the person have no money then they do not buy anything in their life and also not fulfill their basic needs there for those country who is a strong economically masses are much more happy or satisfy moreover Hrithik country Canonical is strong government provide better education job opportunity and so on because they get more points through taxes as a result it is a appropriate to obey attention on economic condition
however there is another school of thought according to which other type of progress are imperative for mass is like health facility good transportation and good infrastructure of city on country and also good education system so country does not have a completely without such type of 5 minutes history reveals that individual always want to search facilities in their in their life as compared to economic strong and they will have a proof period future and leave long leave for example if the country face the problem of education system and also transportation then the country will not become a developed hance government should equally keep and other type of progress and economic progress
to conclude I would the state that economic progress as much as important as other types of progress like health transportation and education facilities and forth Lee reason should give equally importance to country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1003236246 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75543870835 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47572815534 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 309.0 20.2975951904 1522% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1576.0 106.682146367 1477% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 309.0 20.7667163134 1488% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 63.0 7.06120827912 892% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292900276969 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.292900276969 0.084324248473 347% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224430040313 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773183891925 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 157.1 13.0946893788 1200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -250.62 50.2224549098 -499% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 125.0 11.3001002004 1106% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.78 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.57 8.58950901804 251% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 125.6 10.1190380762 1241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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